The Curse of Vritra

This is a fairly well written story, except the girl who is probably going to become the female lead is very annoying and it would be better to make her have less interactions with the Mc. Not all stories need romance in them.

There are a lot of these sign in novels lately 🤔😕        .                                              ...                  .               .

If you get confused by the synopsisthis is basically a blacksmith novel with a bit of fightning, arrogant young master, ass licking young master and ascending to immortality with his blacksmithing skills

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This story has a unique plot and I'm rooting for it. The protagonist is also relatable and I love the writer's sense of description. Keep writing and keep up the good work. You have the potential of becoming a great author.

Its a good and promising story Waiting for the next chapterI hope it dont drop//////////////////////////////////////////////

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Napangiti si Anna. At nagtawanan pa kami habang nagla-log out sa DTR namin kay manong Elmer. Saktong paglabas namin natanaw ko kaagad ang sasakyan ng boyfriend ni Mai. Si Lloyd. Agad din siyang nagpaalam sa'min at dumiretso na sa sasakyan ng kanyang boyfriend.