The Crown's Slave

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This is good author, I enjoyed what I’ve read so far. It has a good storyline and the characters are on point. Continue with the good job author

It’s like reading every other story sort of. Same aspects, same layout. Nothing really screamed original content. I’m pretty sure I’ve read something similar in another webnovel at some point, but don’t qoute me on that.

"Could not I just want to see you?" Castiel asked, pretending to be innocent as he put his hand over his heart in a false pain.

   Delbury laid his card face downward on the tray.

Glancing at Ichigo and Silent to make sure that they were safe, Karin began channelling her spiritual energy before travelling back to where she had come from.

As my hand reached the top of the chest, a sharp light shot out from the chest, like a main character entering the stage with every reflector pointed on it. It blinded me and my naked bottom, as warmth surrounded the clearing.

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