I read the beginning chapters and the story has some potential but the grammar and sentence structure isn't very good. It's hard to read and doesn't make much sense. I was completely lost when he was describing how he ended up at the gang in the beginning
La novela personalmente me impresionó es muy interesante los personajes son bien retratados es súper como ponen el ambiente el ML igualmente ya hizo su aparición y eso es bueno aunque actualmente no aparece mucho por qué la novela tiene corto avance hasta el momento pero personalmente me gusta como es tan complejo aunque aveces existen partes innecesarias pero creo que eso es lo que le da el toque jiji.
This is a really good read, the mixture of romance and thriller is something I personally like, the writing quality of the novel is on the spot, the story structure is good and strong, I can say this because I read it, I personally like the character's development, especially that of Xavier's.Don't waste time reading a review, come on just get straight into the novel, kudos to the author on a job well done.
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So the male angles start to explain that the world that called AngPoe7 are danger by monster and demons king. It seem like there are 4 demons that rule different part of the world. Because of that they are damage the world by killing people rape women and burning. It also cause lot of environmental that AngPoe are pray to god and AngPoe mother are pray to god to summor Hero and destroy them.
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