The Cold Palace Bloom

<p>"Saya hanya melihat surat perintah tak dikenal di perserikatan besar. Surat perintah semacam ini, selama mereka memiliki uang, siapa pun bisa melakukannya, kan? Seperti yang saya lihat, Tuan Pedang Kembar Bertopeng telah dibenci oleh orang-orang ini."</p>

honestly ,the prologue is good and it detailed the mc emotions .the following chapters also has great  grammars, but that's also where the flaw is,the descriptions takes up most of the chapter and give little space for the main elements , but I believe you know what you want to portray,or maybe it's because I like fast paced novels.it's great anyways and has chance for improvement .keep it up 💪