I've read till chapter 5 or 6, and I dislike the way it's going. But that's not the problem. The problem is, the writing just feels strange. I'm not a native english speaker so I'm unable to spot the reason, but it disturbs me so much that I'm unable to read it anymore. Still, try it out, everyone has differnet tastes
The story, and its content are solid. It's the formatting that makes it a tough read to get through. Especially in the beginning of the story, you will find that scenes change without a prior indicator, which gives a very disorienting experience.
I really would like to read this entire story, but as the reviews and comments probably indicate by their lack of numbers, its a really tough read to get through.
Should the author find the time to streamline his or her formatting to a more legible level such as those often seen with the more popular novels on here, then I would love to continue reading it.
As it stands, I had to lower my rating because of the formatting and legibility of the novel.
I think the author would greatly improve the fanbase numbers for his or her novels if they'd invest some time into researching this and applied the lessons learned to the entire novel.
Is there any use for the harem? Or is it like lord’s empire where harem is for some background and show? Please do let me know, so that i can continue to read with expectations. Thanks
truthfully I got lost just within the first 12 or so chapters, nothing is explained and the events feel extremely jumbled and out of place, the grammar it self is good and I could see this improving but I feel the whole beginning would have to be re-written once again in order for the flow of the story to be back in order
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Tbh i like the story a lot but I think you need to reread some chapters and fix them up some part the mc does stuff not really fitting his role are at the given moment I love the story but just some part need fixing
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I really would like to read this entire story, but as the reviews and comments probably indicate by their lack of numbers, its a really tough read to get through.
Should the author find the time to streamline his or her formatting to a more legible level such as those often seen with the more popular novels on here, then I would love to continue reading it.
As it stands, I had to lower my rating because of the formatting and legibility of the novel.
I think the author would greatly improve the fanbase numbers for his or her novels if they'd invest some time into researching this and applied the lessons learned to the entire novel.
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.