Is this gonna be 'True Martial World' and 'I Want To Be A Superstar'. combined? If so then I'm forward to reading this , but I think the synopsis could be done better
The story lack in the category; however, I can't seem to drop it. All the jokes and puns are so bad that they are good. I find the story to be extremely amusing. The biggest problem that I face right now is the romance aspect. Especially with the formation of the harem. I think the story should focus more on the idiot antics of the protagonist. Overall, I really like this book and hope it can be improved.
From Your Fellow Reader,
The Hermit
The story is very fast paced, sometimes it is even hard to keep up. The writing is just average, characters are all idiots, they remind you of monkeys who evolved into humans. Plot is somewhat promising but faling to use the potential.
I don't like it. I don't know how I read up to 105. Wait, I do know. If you are just looking for some thing to mindlessly read in the middle of the night while the alternative is to sleep, this is for you. It has the faint stench of harem development about it.
I like the novel. There's a bit of critique, but that's their preference. There are also a lot of 5-star ratings.
If there were grammar issues, that's not a big problem. Editing it oneself is such a pain so just nicely comment about wrong grammars if you see it. Even if I see it, I just ignore lol.
One of the things I want to salp out of the novel is having the Mc sleeping with his teacher. Well, idk what happened cuz I haven't read the new chapters.
I just stopped cuz I wanted a platonic heroine. :P
It’s disgusting to be attracted to children. People who are need help. It really makes me mad that this is on this app/website. It’s fine if you say that the kid is cute and adorable but to say your sexuality atractted to them is messed up.
Why are your updates so slow and it is just downright downer.... i like this novel but the updates and the slow development is just ridiculous that I wanna just drop this... this ain't even a manga where you need to draw hard to make a chapter..... you just need to think and type and it should even take a day or two for a chapter..... just announce that this is drop if you ain't even gonna update once or twice a week
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From Your Fellow Reader,
The Hermit
If there were grammar issues, that's not a big problem. Editing it oneself is such a pain so just nicely comment about wrong grammars if you see it. Even if I see it, I just ignore lol.
One of the things I want to salp out of the novel is having the Mc sleeping with his teacher. Well, idk what happened cuz I haven't read the new chapters.
I just stopped cuz I wanted a platonic heroine. :P
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