the Brilliant Duchess

Only shooting stars

She ring the bell and bus stops at the next station now she have to walk all the way back to the previous stop, she cursed herself for being so careless.

I liked the idea of a modern Exorcist so I decided to give this Novel a try but it started going towards a downward spiral the ML is supposedly powerful but and strong bus has a weird submissivenes to her husband because if his yang energy which seems very forced and make the story loose its flow, then most of plot was just so annoying at some point because I could never understand why she was did somethings.I hardly comment on novels bit this is just so sad because I felt this had more potential.

Pretty good so far, but there is only three chapters at the time of this review. Sooooooooooo, it might get a little outdated. Could get better could get worse, only time can tell.

Well described ,with good storytelling I feel like I'm watching a move, great jop keep going

I feel the Ntr in this isn’t needed tbh , almost like there’s no reason why there should be Ntr at all. Would there be a redemption arc later?

I'm honestly shocked at how unrecognised this is when novel's with far worse grammar and plot have millions of views. Your writing is a breath of fresh air.