hey I was hyping about what will happen next but damn it's the last update now I'm here still waiting, WAAAAAH POTANGENA(F*CK IN FILIPINO) I'M REALLY REALLY BOOOOREEEED BECAUSE OF THE F*CKING CORONA VIRUS SH*T THAT'S SPREADING LIKE CRAZY, NOW WE'RE LOCKDOWN AND I CAN'T EVEN GO TO HAVE MY DAILY MILKTEA
The overall work is pretty good but there is some things that it lacks to stand out. For one, your starting theme is very cliche in which the main character gets dumped by a love interest, which initiates the protagonist to acquire a special ability. In order to amend this error, develop a groundbreaking plot to draw in the readers.
Really good FF!
Sadly, it's dropped, but still worth to read!
MC is an interesting character, not like some we, readers, are used to so I think that everyone should enjoy reading this!
This is one of the most amazing LitRPGs that I have ever read. The quality was awesome and much better than a lot of the other books I have read. The plot is great and, although the novel is short, there is some character development. The only thing I find wrong with this novel is the fact that there’s probably not going to be any more chapters.
this is a nice novel hope you do a good job for the progress of writing the next parts , again thank you so much for writing this great novel, hope your safe aswell from ncov virus take care always
Great pace and character building. It is a cliche story, but written well. It has a typical start: retunrning to past after being dumped,but in this story it represents the previous life of the mc and building his character.
So 10/10
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Also can anyone give me some suggestions for good books about bookworms prefferebly if its magic related and NOT harem
Sadly, it's dropped, but still worth to read!
MC is an interesting character, not like some we, readers, are used to so I think that everyone should enjoy reading this!
So 10/10
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.