Finally.......i been waiting for this one ever since it became available to vote, i have a really high hope for this one because the same author wrote my favorite "I have a mansion in the post apocalyptic"
What else can I say? Just read this for laughs.The propaganda and heavy nationalism ruined another great novel...Honestly, as much as I enjoyed it, I think it'd been better if they made the sister his real blood relative and add the necklace as a family heirloom. That'd be a lot more interesting as it'll add plot (Which story is missing)Romance: I like it, it's very chill but at the same time feels too perfect. Honestly I'm not sure but if this were a manga I think I'll love her even more.I don't want to see this as a military novel since MC way to sincere. I love his gentleness but the warmth and fluff in this novel is too much that seeing blood is like incompatible with it.
I only managed to get through the first 6 chapters.... The grammar and syntax are beyond bad. The author miss-uses tenses a lot. Infact he interchangeably uses them in every other sentence. Even the average 6th grader should have a better grasp on atleast the 4 simplest and when to use them: Simple past/past progressive and simple present/present progressive. To the author: I am not trying to disparage your work but you are honestly not that gifted when it comes to grammar, either study up or get an editor to do the work for you. One last thing: even in the earlier chapter you are artificially inflating your wordcount. You are creating needlessly complicated sentences that no one understands and break syntax. Keep the sentences short, it will improve flow, you'll make less mistakes and the reader will in no way be confused.
good sir, i have read a lot of cultivation novels ranging from the classics and the new ones and i can confidently say that this is one of the best if not the best. it has a lot of qualities that i loved like the cunning of mc, the mystery that uncovers later on. you have done a splendid job writing this masterpiece. you have used the technological advancement of earth well. you also made a reason for the reason why our mc cultivates his way and what he seeks since the beginning. i am merely writing this to thank you for your hard work and to tell you that your work is appreciated my friend. so here is a 5 star rating for you and i hope you keep striving to get better and improve your story further.
It's sad seeing such great story end up being left in the dust. This story already has great translator and good release rate but was put on hiatus because of some nonsense reason. Fuck Qidian and their ****ty event. They only care about how to sell more spirit stone. Bring back the translator so we can regular update again.
well I promised after 10 chapters I would give a true review so here it is. This is so far a great story the MC is well made and relatible so far and I doubt he will be op anytime soon. His power and skills sound reasonable. The first boss sounds like something I would love to fight myself and hints at the idea of hidden blood lines/abilities. so I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
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