So far the story is great would be perfect if the author describes everything a bit more such as mc, setting/background/new significant place such as when the mc got to the sect author never really described the mc's first impression and the surroundings. Maybe the author will do it in future chapter but it's always better to described as the character moves on his journey, well at least what he is felling and what he sees in his surroundings. Also, try to describe the characters appearance a bit more. This seems to be a major issue in the original novel section, hopefully the author improves on this. One more thing that's killing me is please use capital letter for first letter of the sentence and names. Overall the story is great but needs more details, you want the readers to feel or try to feel what the character is experiencing and picture everything.
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MC gets an op absorbing ability, only absorbs like 2 things. Constantly loses until he comes back, loses again, then comes back and plot armor kicks in. Disappointing.
A minute of your time if you please. The reviews talking about the stupidity of the main character and plot armor in the earlier chapters is true. The reason I am not re-writing them is because i don't want to change things and then the later chapters are filled with plotholes. I am not asking for you to drag yourself through those chapters, if you can't take that stuff, then my advice to you is not to waste your time. Seeing as this is my first novel, I would like to think that my writing will get better over its course. This review is just to ward off less tolerant people, instead of them reading the novel and leaving a permanent negative review about something that I am working/have already worked on in the later chapters. I welcome criticism if it will help me improve my writing skills, but having the rating of my novel lowered because of a situation that is being solved/already been solved is just depressing. If you read to this point, thank you for your time. Hopefully, this review will not cause any misunderstandings
good novel dont know why i have to put 140 characters but hereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
This is one of the most underrated novel I have seen on this site. This story has so much potential, I can't read enough of this book. It combines some of the best ideas. I think this has the quality of a very good translated book. A author should of done a novel like this a long time ago. I hope the author adds multiple realms, and I hope the author makes this novel a 1000+ chapters.
(I think the authors name is one of the best, and one of the most funny name on the site.)
MC is quite retarded tbh... He got an inheritance which allows him to boost his stats by absorbing the blood of others, but more than half the time he forgets to do this after beating some enemies
MC is also a super masochist who lives for the sake of provoking people many times stronger than him and getting destroyed by them, only to live bc of overwhelming plot armor
So much plot armor everytime the Mc is about to die or does something reckless as he usually does something extraordinary saves him and he just forget about it and continues to do stupid stuff without thinking about the consequences
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(I think the authors name is one of the best, and one of the most funny name on the site.)
MC is also a super masochist who lives for the sake of provoking people many times stronger than him and getting destroyed by them, only to live bc of overwhelming plot armor