1. Shameless MC 2. Funny / brilliant albeit slightly vulgar dialogue 3. Interesting romance foreshadowing 4. Lots of fighting / skills5. Reference to modern day games My 2 cents worth after reading the raws.
This novel has a very interesting setting and quite unique. Instead of transmigrating into a weak body, the MC ends up being one of strongest people in the world. But, even though it is true, don't be fooled by this and think we have some OP MC. Nope. The new identity MC obtained is indeed one of strongest in the world, but he is seriously injured and anybody can probably kill him.And it is difficult for him to recover and it will probably take a veryyyy loooong time. Plus, even if he recovers, the MC did not obtain the previous host's memories and thus can't use any martial arts. Overall, this premise of transmigrating into an OP individual is a total scam and I was disappointed. The only thing MC does throughout the novel is act like he knows it all and schemes with what little brain he has. If you are someone who digs these type of storied, this is for you. I found it boring after some time to be honest.
New in my journey but I also like your work so far. Keep at it and try Improving you go along through the process. I will continue reading and give my feedback as I read.
In my opinion, only problem in your novel is that it is very slow . if you solve this problem, then this story has very high potential . You should also focus more on Worldbuilding too .
I love the story so far can you please make it more lively and entertaining, i hope the main charater will have to reveal his true identity soon but before that let him show his family that he is worth
"You are getting me angry with what you are saying, everyone is annoyed and in distress but you don't hear us saying we are all gonna die, so please let's try to think our way through this situation. Besides your negativity hasn't solved anything," Lucas replied.
I almost felt like nobody wanted to buy me which made me happy in a way. hours passed of total boredom and regret. Later on i heard trumpets at a far distance as a man and women in crowns and long beautifully decorated coats approached accompanied by heavily armored soldiers. As they got closer the soldiers started surrounding the area. Slavers and people around quickly knelt and greeted them. Which gave me a hint that they were royalty, maybe the king and queen. The king looked at us slaves and called a soldier and pointed at us. immediately soldiers started to beat everyone to their knees causing a big commotion as people tried to protect themselves. I noticed what was happening and grabbed Emily's hand before soldiers could get to us and we ran. The soldiers chased us and took me and Emily to the ground. The king noticed what was happening and got of his horse and walked towards us with the queen closely behind. The king welcomed me and Emily to his kingdom telling the soldiers to let us be. Emily quickly knelt down and hit me to follow her. I knelt beside Emily as she begged for the kings forgiveness and I also joined in begging him for mercy.
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