we need to address this matter . Dear Author. i read the message in the synopsis bar. let me clarify . your still gonna update chapters here but delete the previous ones? ex. current chapter 43 then after updating to 44 your gonna delete 43? is that how it works? pls clarify the situation
I get why people want to read this. But I think there are better alternatives like "My Rich Wife" and not a MC whose already f*cked his life up and gets wish-fufillment wealth and being a huge simp.. Sigh
The concept behind the story itself is good. But the mc is shown practically as machine whose only job is to eat, sleep, train and dungeon run.. and close to no human interaction. Writing quality is average to say the least as many grammatical mistakes and wrong usage to words can be seen. well, for story development there is nothing of a story only a sort summary of his background and what is now then he just goes around training and dungeon running with no human or world interaction... Character design. . . well, at least the characters that author had given importance to are well described and designed but later in story i got the feeling that the story is all about mc dungeon running with no outside interaction.update stability.. .i don't know about this... World background well, it is well described but as we progress only mc's home, motel and dungeon becomes readers world because nothing is told or happens with mc in relation to that. So in short if you want to read a novel where mc just focuses on getting stronger with nothing else in mind then go ahead. (well, after many chapters some world opening happens with mc but still it can be considered negligible interaction with outer world)
Nahmeh was a witch. And against the common practice, he would never make his familiars do anything he wouldn't do himself, or what they felt incapable of doing if the option was available. And although Finral wasn't his familar, exactly, the gnome was a creature of free will and thought. In Nahmeh's eyes the choice was Finral's.
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