An excellent foundation. A specific format of text should be used for the interaction between him and the system. Hopefully he'll be able to call upon a skill exclusive to pets after a significant evolution. It would be great if mc will be able to fight as well.
I like the concept and you went slightly off of usual main classes for MC also I like how you didn't go with the reincarnated idea its good but hard to make good unless you plan your story well overall good chapter
it's really good so far I came here after reading the author's previous book(check it out that one was good ) , also author did the the mc's home world become something like players (or hunters) and rifts (dungeons) .and will there only be two worlds (home world , and the fantasy world) or many more
With there understandings of the supernatural it will give us an edge on the competition especially those damn vampires who have taken over some of the territory of the down town clubs these vamps are bad for business stealing a large amount of our customers.
If you have any ideas on what world you would like to see slaughtered by the MC, then leave it in the comments below. If by popular demand you want to see me do a work on TODAG or anything like that, then I will have to read it all over again. It might take a long time, but I can do it.
"You fucking bitch!" A bald muscular man slaps a girl with red hair and emerald eyes, "Gaaah! Please stop father!" The girl's father angrily grips her neck and lifts her up. He is brutally choking with all of his force, he was going to break her neck. "It is because of you that your mother is fucking dead!" He starts crying, "You should have never been born!"
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