i'll give it a 5 stars! i love how the writer narrate the story and i love how the writer planned the plot! kudos! keep bleeding, Preshy! lots of love!
I really enjoyed the beginning chapters. i normally don’t enjoy systems but it definitely sounds good so far. I hope you focus more on the world building. And you did good at conveying emotions
Based solely upon the first chapter and the synopsis, it sounds exceedingly similar to 'IRASS'. However, in execution, it is quite good. The writing style flows well and the paragraphs are correctly spaced. Though the quality of grammar is slightly sub par, the story and character development seem solid. Good job if this is your first novel!
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Read up to chapter 43. Horrible novel!! MC is a shut-in coward otaku. Supposedly well read in cultivation novels but is an idiot when and even more a coward when knowing that he transmigrated into a powerful body with a system. Can not relate or comprehend the MC’s character or personality. It’s just tooooooo retarded and annoying. Waste of time
Well written story about a complete moron. It was one of those MC's that I was hoping would just die from his own stupidity but he kept being saved by ever-present plot armor
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