Dear author~san as i'm Saying "i want to become strong to return to my mother or whatnut"! Then this is i always saying on my previous comments on his/her story that "unintentionally"deleted...i keep on waiting the reply of the author or other reader to enlighten me if i'm wrong or harsh on my words but that's how i feel when the mc is strong then why are feeling bad about other's if you have goal/s! And what's on irking me is he will give them a favor for what he did on their kingdom for killing it's people!? Why not kill them to gain bio-points or etc. That you need to become strong then you can came back to your mother as soon as possible.their are alot of worlds to explore, and this too the part the most annoying if you want to have connection, friend's, or to have a partner to talk to why didn't you wish to have a human form of shin godzilla of your choice?The story is greatThe character's are great too The world backgroun is tooThe story development is amazing i cannot deny it but why you cannot even reply to my comment!? Then you can enlighten me
The idea is original but while usually i dont really care about grammar and punctuation,the sentences structuring makes it hard to read and immerse yourself in the story. But the biggest downside for me, and thats a personal opinion, is that your first few chapters should only be about the mc, yet all 4 of the first chapters have different 1rst person povs wich is one of the things i dislike the most since i like to immerse myself in the mc and i dont have split personalities.
It’s ok. I liked it at first, it was pretty average, but I still like reading it. There were a few errors here and there in the translation and it seems somethings were lost in translation. The story was going ok, and then the MC gets a super skill to be able to never be discovered no matter how strong someone was and to hide from fate, only for it to be used once and never again. It was completely pointless. The prophet went to divine his location, got backlash, within 10 ch, MC goes to another crevice and doesn’t bother using his skill (it basically makes him totally invisible, and as he gets stronger remove himself from people’s memories.) and gets his identity found out by everyone. MC is a total idiot. There’s like no world background
The World Eater saw the mage and realized he was not aware of him. He decided then he would take him and have a private talk. He swooped down quickly and gracefully scooping Loki up into his mouth before Loki was aware of his presence.
A pair soft hands removed my little hands covering my face. He's still holding my hands when I cried harder. It's not nice to see a lady's crying face.
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