One thing Is very clear about this novel. The author put a lot of work in it & did his research which is much appreciated. But 2 things I didn't like about this novel that caused me to ultimately drop it after 110 chapters.1. the story is too linear & there are rarely any twists. this makes the novel boring.2. the MC is a hypocrite & nothing special about him.
writing style and grammar needs to improve but the story is enjoyable to read and you would want to know further story while reading so I hope author continue to write this novel for many more chapters.and i would like a mc who is more confident and clever and also true to his desire without hurting people...
I gave such a low score because suddenly am tossed into dbz Universe and since i read some n watch some dbd so i understood a lik bit of this but otherwise Fresh people who havent wAtched or Read any dbz have no clue Who is who because their was no world building and i dont even know who the mc is oR his story because their was no character build. The fight scene also was written cheaply got to aDd some more into it but its underStanable since your knew nice try👍 like they say all writers begin small good luck On your quest for greatness 😎
Hello guys! I am the author of this novel!This is my second novel in this platform, and I feel fairly confident about my writing quality.So guys, feel free to enjoy this novel of mine!
i dont give reviews normally, but this book is great. its one of the better ones of the "useless hero gets abandoned/thrown out/betrayed" genre. the story isnt going too fast, but also not too slow. all in all a great read.
When we got outside I collapsed onto the ground letting the cold frosty grass comfort my heat assaulted body. Tears flowed from eyes both from the smoke and the emotional trauma of today.
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