Like the path the story is taking and the style is one of my favorite. If I have to give a suggestion is to reduce a little bit the morons side of the story. This is the kind of young master owns the world and gets slap in the face, but this kind of characters should get a bit less story time to improve the pacing. Also I feel a bit sad when we get 1 character that is so bad that ruins a good story, sometimes is the MC, other times is antagonist, in this one it’s is friend Leonel. The dude have a 5years old brain and no common sence and MC instead of educate him his supporting his decisions. please upgrade him to at least a 12 years brain so he can tell right from wrong!
So this is about our mc that is reincarnated into a demon spawn after being killed by a gang.So our mc first discovers this when he is in a baby body with wings.
The writing quality is good. But since you're writing from a past perspective, don't mix it up with present tense. something like end should be written as ended when something that you're trying to say. 'has' is a present tense and 'had' is past. Don't confuse it
Nice work my former classmate, keep it up to reach your goals, inspire others and always enjoy making novel like this 😁. I hope that you understad what I said 😂. I fully recommend to read this novel ❤, and I hope that this novel will be number 1 soon! Godbless😇
Not a very bad not a very good concept. Mc was a cannibal in his previous life and also a serial killer so it is logical to expect that he should be cold blooded and have a collected personality but in the starting ch he is anything but that. How he easily forgave his mother for burning him alive for a year tho for his sake but still she hurt u bruh how can u easliy say its ok. And the darkness thing is quite weird but may be explained in the upcoming ch. He loses his cool with the fl and acts like an idiot. And lastly the thing i hate the most the cultivation world . The world is based on western fantasy as there are dukes kings marquis etc but then wth is there cultivation and spiritual energy or whatever. I jst hate the cultivation tag coz the majority of them are trash and weird. The power stages are so weird and cringy and the heaven and earth words which are literally in every chinese novel is so annoying.
Finally found a good VILLAIN Novel where MC is smart and does things all wishes to see. Good World Background development. Better than most of those "villain face-slapping protagonists" plots. Has its own pace which is appreciated rather than rushing to take down children of destiny.
He sifted through the clothes on the floor. Putting away the clean ones, he gathered the dirty ones and put them on the couch. He could wash them when he returned from school.
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