This novel lacked 1. A complete background detail of the world the protagonist currently in. 2. A not so rushed plot. U could see this from things that the protagonist suddenly get, it suddenly exist out of thin air. Like a rushed plot armour. 3. The name of a certain character kept on changing. Like the spirit sword the protagonist currently have. Sometimes the sword is a she and suddenly it was a he. The name of the sword was also kept on changing. It was a bit confusing when U read it.I've only read below 10 chapters and this is what I've noticed while reading.
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