Ok. This novel might be you first so I won't be critisising your writing..seriously ,though, it's fine putting none cannon transformations,but saying that freeza has trillions in power level and saying that the MC was shocked unconscious for a year while having millions in PL is just garbage bull****.FIX THE POWER LEVELS.Also I think that your progressing the novel too quick.had a nice "overpowered MC" idea at the start but it turned out sh*t
Its a really good book, my only problem is that, like most of other harems, any other male is not allowed to be happy, at least in the first half of the book, at least the cousin shouldnt have died and much less, a virgin, it could even be good for the plot that the aunt gave herself to Tian after he rescued Xia Han and in the next book getting him the gf he wanted.But anyhow, I'm still waiting for the next book of Xia Tian
Very good. Calm, calculative Mc. Able to use what he has to his advantage. Minimal to no cliches. It’s interesting and draws you in. I hope this gets picked, as I’m still craving for more.
I have been eyeing your novels from more than a year but since they were harem and I recently came across the platform, I didn't read them. Since you said this one is a no harem and sinlge FL, friendship to slowly romance. I am going to take your word for it along with the amazing start. Also, thanks for the FP from the event.
Basically guy reincarnated/Isekaid to a xianxia world become number 1 expert and about to die. So he got a system before his death and the system promised that he will be revived as long as his Disciples reach Saint realm, which they did 3000 years later. He got partially revived because before his death he got an enlightenment and makes him more powerful, therefore more energy was needed to revive him, which the system does not have. Now he is forced to basically becomes a dungeon core and have to kill people to revive.Imo it's not bad. There's some inconsistencies with some term but not a lot. As for other things such as character.. Well it's only 20 chapters and until now there's really not much that the Mc has done..Overall I would say to give it a try, might be good might be bad.
I absolutely adore this story. it's very entertaining. The only issues that I've come across for myself is how slow the story is developing, and how slow its being updated. However, writing takes time which is something I will continue to respect as I wait for the next installment.
Quite an intriguing story you have there author. The mysteries surrounding Sam are making me curious and drawn more. Moreover, love the understandable language. Not too deep and not too simple. Just perfect. Looking forward to more of the story.
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