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Well till now the story so far has been very thrilling and yeilds to have anticipations all the time as i had ...The character must be developed to an all new height of power but he should also come to his home planet every once in a while to show off his achievements...Well, i have actually like the story so far but it has been quite a long time since they have updated any chapter of it so i actually am thinking of migrating a bit to other platforms to search for the new chapter as i really can not wait any longer and it has already been very very very very long since they have updated the chapters ...
It will look better if you change the cover of the story. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I relate to Andrew a lot with how he doesn't want to disappoint his mother, I really look forward to reading more! It's very good story, keep up the good work β‘
First.. since my mother tongue not english ...so you will find some grammatical errors ... But you can skip that ... The story will gradually start to improve after you get to know the world ...and then we'll get into the original plot ... I have a fanart About the characters .. I don't know if anyone needs them? I can post them in the comments Or can I make an Instagram account or something like that?
I personally am loving it and quite possibly in the near future this work will become 4/5 in writing and 5 in the rest it uses several resources of narrative connection and character development that are only noticeable in best sellers. But although the writing in particular is still somewhat immature, it has everything to improve and be a great work.
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