That thing about the MC getting teachers and things like that bothers me a lot, the system is already quite strong, accepting the legacy of an alchemist was bad in my humble opinion, I hate the berserker class and from the story that the alchemist told, it is a Useless that he did not protect his wife and saving the world is not my style so I leave this novel, the novel is good but it does not meet my criteria so do not base yourself on my review to decide whether to read it or not, success to the author .
Thank you for this book. I love it and hope you continue to write more chapters. The direction you are taking the first chapter is great, I only hope you don't destroy it after this few amazing chapters. 5 star review for you for now.
The start of this book is great, it highlighted only the most important plots needed to build the characters. While you could have done a better Job excluding the short intimate scene, I think you are doing a good job so far. Keep writing
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I have just started but so far so good, I am seeing some good developments. The pace you are going is great. No unnecessary writings just to fill up space. Your characters are also simple and easy to relate. It's great you are going down this path but be sure to make the Harem big and overpowered.
This is better than I had hoped. Continue writing and make sure to maintain the story well. since I am adding to my library it means this is one of the best books out there. Dont't destroy it along the way
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