Utter fucking trash, The Only Advice for you is don't read it, DON'T FUCKING EVEN BOTHERING TO READ IT, this is the first time i made a useless review, even trashy novels get better review from me with constructive criticism, I'm chapter 25+ expecting the main character to grow up just a tiny bit, but the progress is so fucking slow that it's killing me, HE'S RETARDED NOT CHILDISH , Since even if i search the whole universe the only way i could found one would be if they have mental disabilities.
Well there nothing much to review here but u know i like mc but u can make it lighter if u not put the twise too much in the beginning, i think if u put there then itll be very long story but that good if u can make daily release... I'll gave u these score but they aren't final so keep improve i like ur story
An OP MC who seem to know too much and getting on everyone’s nerves with his attitudes ; mind you, this is just a little kid giving a ****ty attitude to everyone. I wouldn’t blame any of the other characters wanting to wipe him and his clan out of existence. Seems the story is like parents/guardians of this clan trying to raise and protect this little asswipe and all he does is cause trouble.
Reading this story has been boring and the OP MC just makes you want to turn him over your knee to spank him. Not really much development in this story also pretty dry
Great story! unique MC! it's really a good story wih potential of 2-3k chapters at least it's interesting and funny op mc who is a perv from born xD I really hope the author won't give up on this or it would be too disappointing >.<
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: The constant multiple scene changes within a single chapter are confusing (speaking of POV's). I don't understand the world at all. I can see the intention and potential of the plot and characters, but also see a lack of depth and follow through on those.
Positive Feedback: Good character and story ideas. Also, Seems like you are keeping to the post rate you promised. Only spotted one grammar error.
Personal Feedback: Good ideas with a ad execution, my apologies, but I will not be continuing this novel. I hope you continue for those who enjoy your book, I just can't enjoy a book that seems like the author was just trying to rush all their ideas (not rush through the story...the story is actually quite slow... It just feels like the story making process was rushed)
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Reading this story has been boring and the OP MC just makes you want to turn him over your knee to spank him. Not really much development in this story also pretty dry
Constructive Criticism: The constant multiple scene changes within a single chapter are confusing (speaking of POV's). I don't understand the world at all. I can see the intention and potential of the plot and characters, but also see a lack of depth and follow through on those.
Positive Feedback: Good character and story ideas. Also, Seems like you are keeping to the post rate you promised. Only spotted one grammar error.
Personal Feedback: Good ideas with a ad execution, my apologies, but I will not be continuing this novel. I hope you continue for those who enjoy your book, I just can't enjoy a book that seems like the author was just trying to rush all their ideas (not rush through the story...the story is actually quite slow... It just feels like the story making process was rushed)