Absolutely bussin', I don't know if it's because there is a lack of good one-punch fanfic or what but I like it, and I want more fanfic similar to this.
Receiving items from the far future to market in the present.I would split the novel into two sections, the reviewing and the MC’s life.I like the idea. He reviews products from the future on the internet via videos/livestreams and is paid with the product. He uses the products in his life and that’s what the novel is about. He gets a cool toy and we see what happens because of it.Most of the content is on his day to day life, mainly consisting of humor, character interactions, and random events (as I would describe it). This is by no means a serious novel (so far at least) so have an open mind as you read.The humor isn’t my cup of tea. It’s exaggerated and sometimes drawn out for too long.I’m also not a fan of the character interactions, his three younger sisters, yes three, are all bratty in their own ways. The way they act is fine but sometimes the way they act is not fine. Like when they work together to exploit their older brother, the MC. The parents I liked sometimes and sometimes not. And the teachers I definitely dislike.And then what’s left are random events that are scrambled in to show character interaction and bits of story to keep everything moving.For people that have read, the random events would be like the amusement park, the soda prank on the boy, and the jumping event. The story would be the dinner meeting, running from the teacher, and the exam.Breaking everything down, it doesn’t seem like that much or good at all but I enjoyed reading it.This review is pretty bad but what do you expect when it’s almost 7 AM.
The story is one of the best newer stories on the site. However, the recent transition from less frequent regular sized chapters to more frequent tiny chapters is infuriating. The new chapters feel like nothing has been accomplished. Go back to the other way as this is ridiculous.
Solid 4/5.Other than a few pronoun mistakes here and there, the translation is quite good. Another mega plus point is this is not a harem. Regarding the story, the story is of a transmigrated person who gets immortality as his cheat. Immortality as in he can't die, but doesn't have other OP powers other than it. MC is a smart person who knows the dangers associated with this when he doesn't have the strength to match the cheat, so he acts with a lot of caution. Overall, highly recommended.
Very interesting. I am intrigued in the sibling relationship and the MC's goals. I want to see what kind of plot the author has laid out.Writing Quality: I can see the quality of the writing and that you try very hard to edit. There is still small grammar errors, but overall content was prestine. I do have a pet peave for authors who tell action words, instead of showing the action. (Example: Sigh, *cough cough)Story Development: The pace of the story is perfect for this kind of genre.Character Design: I can see Zuifan's personality vividly. Just wondering if Chunu will have a big role because she seems invisible to me. Perhaps give her more descriptions. World Background: Good world building. So far the book is slowly explaining itself.
Well written and thought out story. Can be confusing at times but it won't last long. It's a decent read in my opinion but it's not for me, it's too boring or what can I say ummmm.......... Story feels kinda bland for my taste. You can give it a try before Deciding yourself.
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