The Alpha’s Redemption

The Base concept of the novel has a decent line for the story. The troubles Start with the Author's lack of knowledge about the location written about. He makes the setting in the United States but doesn't have the back ground for the things talked about. The SAT exam is a multiple choice test taken for college entrance. This test is scored with a numerical grade without any letters of A+ through F. The grading is not done by teachers but is scanned by machine. The scores are not announced publicly but are either mailed or E-mailed to the participants.wechat is not used by mainstream populace. While I will give the author props for writing this, I hope you take the criticism of checking the details about your content better.     

yall this is such a good one  wish there was more of it!!!                                                                                 

This book👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Keep it up. ... the story is going great and i hope that you keep writing at this pace.... .Ig you want it as a long term story as per you mentioned.  . don't worry I will give you my power stones.

Chen Linyun served her jasmine tea then seated himself opposite her.  "Okay, we can schedule it next Saturday."

They immediately gave her pieces of papers and a pen. Which they guided her where she will fill-up. Several minutes passes she's done and they all shook their hands to her.

- No! - I spoke without any hesitation - You should....

Xyrus:ma'am sino ba may sabi na hindi ako pupunta sa unahan ma'am damay damay na to mga kaibigan ko sila hindi ko sila pababayaanXD one for all all for one!XD