The Alpha and his Broken Mate

I really like this. It's got good flow and a very satisfying way to "overpower" the mc.I also like the concept that the mc can't just be a mere vengeful tool for his sister and actually has to have some character development although imo this development is not ideal, rather a bit confusing, -i dont know what the mc actually wants to do- but also not done yet i'm waiting to see where this all goes. I 'm waiting for next part!!!

The idea is repetitive and shallow, and why does it need this dramatic dimension? Can’t you write a story without any offensive events, such as sleeping together without marriage? You always portray women as nothing but a body in front of men. Just try to change the concept built around sleeping with someone else; it’s very bad.

I just read the first chapter and I'm hooked already. This is gonna be an amazing journey, I'm sure of it. Kudos to you, author!