It’s good, minimal filler, complex story, character development is decent. Definitely a read I’d return to for another go, worth it! Please support this novel
It's a good story so far, slow-paced. The conversation between the MC and the Alchemy Emperor is entertaining. However, it would be great if you could adjust some extravagant wording as most readers wouldn't be able to understand it without assistance.
Great start and nice world-building. I don't have much knowledge about cultivation and such Eastern fantasy novels yet I could follow along and understand what was going on.
If I had to say a minor gripe, then it would be that there is a lot of info dump in the first two chapters, other than that no complaints from my side, good job and I would recommend it to anyone interested in Eastern fantasy.
Chu Yunfan unfortunately doesn't have either form of cultivation at first, but don't let that fool you. It's the seed that will grow into a mighty tree.
If you're into martial arts with a bit of a fantasy flair then give this series a try. I would highly recommend it!
Very good writing. This is one of the better books out there with a good story and character. It makes good use of real world knowledge to make a realistic cultivation world. The writing quality is also among the best and the characters and story have very high potential.
Shameless author review. This book is a embracing all the tropes and fusing them together in a pot for something that I hope will be interesting and new. Please check it out and explore the world of TAELIMH with me. Keep reading, keep commenting, keep reviewing, and most importantly, keep spiting.
-Author That Loves Spiting
This stuff is good. Nice world building and lore. Makes you want to read more. Also it's really easy to read compared to many other novels. Everyone give it a try.
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If I had to say a minor gripe, then it would be that there is a lot of info dump in the first two chapters, other than that no complaints from my side, good job and I would recommend it to anyone interested in Eastern fantasy.
Chu Yunfan unfortunately doesn't have either form of cultivation at first, but don't let that fool you. It's the seed that will grow into a mighty tree.
If you're into martial arts with a bit of a fantasy flair then give this series a try. I would highly recommend it!
-Author That Loves Spiting