The grammar is perfect so you don't have to worry about loses brain cells. The world building and characters are also really good; the MC's connection to the world he gets put in and how its handled makes everything more interesting. Not only is the story good but the author pumps out chapters like crazy and that enthusiasm is pretty good for writing a story, as it can be pretty easy to lose motivation if something comes up.
Great story with a nice writing style as well as good language use, enjoying every bit of it. Highly recommended. Chapter lengths are good and flows well. Wishing all the best to the author and keep up the good work
so far I'm up to chapter 97 and I have to say this is an awesome novel. all the characters a likable and it is a very funny novel with some good action. the main character is not over powered so far. definitely reccomend it.
The reviews make this seem great but all the 5 stars are bs. I’m barely on chapter 4 and there are already hella problems. 1 problem is that Jack disrespects the KING AND WALKS OUT OF THE CASTLE AFTER “convincing” A GUARD? Even if this is a fantasy, that’s already BS. And on chapter 4, Jack doesn’t want people to know he’s a hero but when the branch leader yells out”. Hey Brat! Are you the hero?” Jack yells out “yeah, what of it?” This sh*t already made me lose so many brain cells and it’s only the 4th chapter
Not gonna lie. I was really excited in the beginning. I thought MC is not going to be some kind of pushover but his own man. He couldn't care less about king and the royalty, and to be honest i liked it and I hoped it would stay that way. But boy was I wrong. The selfish "hero" turned out to be typical cliche virgin that shits his pants whenever girl touches him.
But let's leave that aside. The first thing that surprised me was the absolute idiocy of the MC and side characters.
"Oh you have just found a legendary fox that is known in legends as a beast that burns everything to the ground with its hellish flames?
LET'S TALK ABOUT PUBLICLY SO EVERYONE KNOWS."
"Oh you have formed a party with some douchebags that you don't trust aparat from the Hunter and Samurai-sensei? Let's tell them that you own a legendary beast. Especially when two of the members are dodgy AF at that point."
"Oh you want to go to another kingdom (that would gladly go to war with yours) to loot an ancient Tomb that belong to a noble family? Oh go ahead but change your face because you're too famous. Oh, oh and don't bother with changing your name because it's really hard to connect the dots between a rising star of a hero and a random overpowered 20lvl character of the same name, especially when you tell your enemies that your name is real.
Also don't forget the overpowered item that makes you invisible but don't use it to escape from the tomb. Threaten the noble families instead so it can result in your girlfriend death. But hey you just got yourself another girlfriend!"
Then the worst happend. The harem. My god is it crap. Everyone falls for MC after 15 minutes of knowing him. Then MC is FORCED to double marriage, and 2 other girls want to sleep with/marry him. He turnes into a complete virgin-pushover. I was reading through it hoping that those girls would die out at some point so the author can actually start writing a good story, but as of 200+ chapter it's only getting worse. The interactions between the MC and his wives/concubines are really dry and annoying. They are actally worse than fillers in Bleach anime.
And the sad part is, those interactions are getting more and more common. Those 'lovely' wives have a almost non-existant personality.
Actually decent characters like the Hunter and Samurai are barely talked about later on. The main focus is on the harem.
Most human opponents MC meets are just typical, cliche, prideful young masters that get whooped in three sentences.
By the way, don't get it twisted. I don't mean that the MC should be ruthless and merciless psycho. I just wish he had some interesting personality, backbone or something. Anything honestly.
Because of that i decided to drop it at around chapter 230ish.
My english might not be the best as it's not my first language so my apologies if reading this hurt your brain in anyway ♥.
Sorry for the rant but this story just annoyed me.
Waste of coins/free passes. Do not recommend.
I've only read 4 chapters but that was already enough to get a glimpse of the MC's behavior. It's comparable to a person ordering food in a restaurant, after getting the food the person says he never ordered it and leaves.
Right at the first chapters of this ****show you can notice what most living beings dread... EXTREME PLOT ARMOR.
The mc is just an asshole to the king and can just escape the palace without any repercussion, right after that he is forced by a drunk guild leader to enter his guild... guess what?! He just bows down, because he is a strong and independent (e d g y) Mc that won't be a slave to those damned kings! Even if the way that he does that is by plot armor and is ultimately meaningless! Yeah! You go Main character!
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the story, its
just another chuunibyou author writing his wet dreams without much thought of how social life really works
But let's leave that aside. The first thing that surprised me was the absolute idiocy of the MC and side characters.
"Oh you have just found a legendary fox that is known in legends as a beast that burns everything to the ground with its hellish flames?
LET'S TALK ABOUT PUBLICLY SO EVERYONE KNOWS."
"Oh you have formed a party with some douchebags that you don't trust aparat from the Hunter and Samurai-sensei? Let's tell them that you own a legendary beast. Especially when two of the members are dodgy AF at that point."
"Oh you want to go to another kingdom (that would gladly go to war with yours) to loot an ancient Tomb that belong to a noble family? Oh go ahead but change your face because you're too famous. Oh, oh and don't bother with changing your name because it's really hard to connect the dots between a rising star of a hero and a random overpowered 20lvl character of the same name, especially when you tell your enemies that your name is real.
Also don't forget the overpowered item that makes you invisible but don't use it to escape from the tomb. Threaten the noble families instead so it can result in your girlfriend death. But hey you just got yourself another girlfriend!"
Then the worst happend. The harem. My god is it crap. Everyone falls for MC after 15 minutes of knowing him. Then MC is FORCED to double marriage, and 2 other girls want to sleep with/marry him. He turnes into a complete virgin-pushover. I was reading through it hoping that those girls would die out at some point so the author can actually start writing a good story, but as of 200+ chapter it's only getting worse. The interactions between the MC and his wives/concubines are really dry and annoying. They are actally worse than fillers in Bleach anime.
And the sad part is, those interactions are getting more and more common. Those 'lovely' wives have a almost non-existant personality.
Actually decent characters like the Hunter and Samurai are barely talked about later on. The main focus is on the harem.
Most human opponents MC meets are just typical, cliche, prideful young masters that get whooped in three sentences.
By the way, don't get it twisted. I don't mean that the MC should be ruthless and merciless psycho. I just wish he had some interesting personality, backbone or something. Anything honestly.
Because of that i decided to drop it at around chapter 230ish.
My english might not be the best as it's not my first language so my apologies if reading this hurt your brain in anyway ♥.
Sorry for the rant but this story just annoyed me.
Waste of coins/free passes. Do not recommend.
The mc is just an asshole to the king and can just escape the palace without any repercussion, right after that he is forced by a drunk guild leader to enter his guild... guess what?! He just bows down, because he is a strong and independent (e d g y) Mc that won't be a slave to those damned kings! Even if the way that he does that is by plot armor and is ultimately meaningless! Yeah! You go Main character!
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