The big daddy gifted you a castle so you'd better take the gold this time. In next year's competition you won't have a chance after all since I will be taking part
Story development and world background: A story involving many myths and legends, including Vampires, Werewolves and much more. The story is about a boy's journey in a world of legends while occupying the body of one of the Four Ancestral Vampires. The story revolves around Atlas and his quest to reclaim what he had lost. A journey which brings him at the forefront of the legends he only used to hear about. The story will have mystery, action, adventure and much more to keep you engaged and waiting for the next chapters.
Character: Atlas used to be an ordinary boy who had smartness but lacked the strrength and the courage. With the sudden change in his life, he walks in a journey to reinvent himself.
Okay!! From where do I start?
First of all, thank you author for such an amazing book.
A boy who loathes the vampire race ends up in a vampire's body and that too one of the strongest vampires. Hmm, interesting!! Now that Atlas has become a vampire, it is his turn to show who is in power. Come on, bring in the revenge.
The writing quality is great and the story proceeds smoothly, although at times it does become a little confusing. But that's fine. And certainly, one of the many things the author is great at updating regularly.
The story is filled with action, emotions and of course, mystery. The story is intriguing and although there are 20 odd chapters currently, it is enough to keep the readers hooked and curious to find out what happens next. Some of the scenes are so vividly described that it is easy to visualize them.
Now, all that remains to see is how the story proceeds and what kind of character Atlas will turn into.
Kudos to the author for such an awesome story and all the best!!!!
Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.
Popular Reviews
Story development and world background: A story involving many myths and legends, including Vampires, Werewolves and much more. The story is about a boy's journey in a world of legends while occupying the body of one of the Four Ancestral Vampires. The story revolves around Atlas and his quest to reclaim what he had lost. A journey which brings him at the forefront of the legends he only used to hear about. The story will have mystery, action, adventure and much more to keep you engaged and waiting for the next chapters.
Character: Atlas used to be an ordinary boy who had smartness but lacked the strrength and the courage. With the sudden change in his life, he walks in a journey to reinvent himself.
Update Stability: Daily release.
Please give the book a try and see for yourself.
First of all, thank you author for such an amazing book.
A boy who loathes the vampire race ends up in a vampire's body and that too one of the strongest vampires. Hmm, interesting!! Now that Atlas has become a vampire, it is his turn to show who is in power. Come on, bring in the revenge.
The writing quality is great and the story proceeds smoothly, although at times it does become a little confusing. But that's fine. And certainly, one of the many things the author is great at updating regularly.
The story is filled with action, emotions and of course, mystery. The story is intriguing and although there are 20 odd chapters currently, it is enough to keep the readers hooked and curious to find out what happens next. Some of the scenes are so vividly described that it is easy to visualize them.
Now, all that remains to see is how the story proceeds and what kind of character Atlas will turn into.
Kudos to the author for such an awesome story and all the best!!!!
I personally hate romance and harem so I can't be too cruel with the review.
I hope that the author can add some mysterious elements in the future. If you are a casual revenge story fan, this novel would be enjoyable for you.