The first ten chapters are very instructive concerning Japanese martial arts, it incredible how much you learn from this novel, additionally, the story development so far is top notch!
I feel that this isn't ready for prime time. The translation is all over the place, with wrong words, incorrect grammar nand punctuation, and more. It is hard to get into the story with these barriers in the way. The author has an interesting story, but it is overshadowed by the poor translation/writing.
ooooh this is a different approach! I like it! I have to search the word Bokken, and it amazed me! (Japanese wooden sword used for training in kenjutsu, for all the readers who are stopping by at the review section) anywaay, I really love the concept here! You should add more tags to attract more readers! Thats all I can say for now. Good job, author!
This novel is really engaging and promising. Your consistency, hard work and dedication really shines through in it and I can't wait to see what happens next. I will be adding this to my collection [img=update]
The name of the story is really catchy. Your writing quality is good too. But the only problem I found is the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Maybe a little bit more information would attract more and more readers. Good luck!
Overall the tone of the story is set from the beginning. I can't see any grammar mistake and the character has its own space when the chapters go forward. keep up good work author.
I really liked the author notes continuing side by side with novel. I'm interested in finding more about what happens further in story . Right from first chapter I am hooked in story. I was already taking side of aichi vs gao 100th match but turning point strucked hard. Waiting for more chapters by author...
Check out this novel! I really loved it!
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