Temporal Pearls

Shameless review and 5 stars, I have been pregnant with this story for some time now, and for that I know it will be amazing and unique read for any one that was lucky to stumbled upon it.

The Novel tell the story of Seth Enoch, a boy with below average Constitution, and due to that abnormal body of his, in slight fatigue he will lose consciousness or even went to coma.

What else will that poor guy do with his life apart of Gaming Vr Games that don't require his physical cooperation. And he became good at it, until an accident happened which his mother banned him from playing.

Years later another game was introduced but special and have no apparent imperfection. Seth dived again.

Seth confirmed the game unusual and mysterious feel and for many reason he believed that they were not diving in game but rather their mind was being transported to another world and for that he assumed that he can copy their technology to his World or even used something to invoke beyond natural phenomena. He went on a Quest of his own to prove or disprove his assumption while also trying to brought their technology to his World.
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The MC is smart, genius even. But it was not all about winning, he fail to win better prizes and his handicap will hindered him a lot in game and real life but he will use his head to find solutions.
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Regarding whether the game is another world or not, read the novel and found out. You will not be disappointed!

very good book.
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I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players.

I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case.

I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better.

I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.

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chapter 131-138 fix the chapter
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I have currently read up to the latest chapter as of the time I am posting this, writing quality is very good and I haven’t found many mistakes so far, the updateing is pretty consistent, story development is good since there is already a goal to be achieved by the mc and others and although the idea of the in-game abilities becoming real is cliched and has already been done this one is somewhat unique from my knowledge and it will be both exciting and entertaining to see how the mc develops, the world background hasn’t been explained in great detail but there has been some information given about the world’s background and how it could develop so overall the world background is adequate and doesn’t affect the story’s quality, this book as a whole is quite good and I would recommend giving it a read and to preserve with it since the start is a little confusing/slow but it gets better as you go along