TEJRAN FF - MANZIL -E - ISHQ

Very original beginning where MC is designed before his death, no classical "ugly/boring/untalented dude got hit by a bus, reincarnated to different world - ok now I will be strong (here barely MC introduction starts)". No plot-armor popping in every hard fight with miracle power-up friendship power. No harem-king ****.My very first review about book, don't want to spoil so all I can say is - It's worth your time. My second best webnovel here right after ISSTH.

Honestly, my biggest problem is the lack of basic spelling, and intentionally spelling **** wrong, admiral amurica, really? Just use the real ****, who cares, it's nothing but annoying and adds nothing. Literally tanks this book to the point from I want to read this until it finishes to I might drop it. Or spelling different as difernt. Use basic ms word or grammerly m8, or just go through paragraph comments, every one is outlined in them months ago, you can't take 1 day off writing new chapters to fix the rest? You could even do like a discord thing for future chapters with unedited chaps, where they can read there and tell you any errors, I've seen other books do it and improve significantly

I hope this novel won't be boring just like ZTJ . zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz . Let's give it a try .

Why do they pick the shitty ones??? There are really good novels. I really dont get it. Why you do this? FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller

Wonderful plot. Historical romance described in the Egyptian setup. NICE...Brewing romance in the middle of misunderstanding, very interesting.Overall Review: Very interesting story, the characters are well built and the plot isn't rushed. You can just imagine the story in your head as you read the words and images will unfold with the description... anyways that's what happens for me when I read a good book ;) just like a movie!Suggestion: Few paragraphs are too long so you can break them into smaller ones for better readability.Kudos. :)

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Name: 问道红尘/Seeking the Dao in the Seemingly Mundane Mortal WorldRating: 9.1(143)Status: 1190(Completed)Start Date: 2019-03-01Author no. of books: 2Achievements: 300,000 collections.

I  like the story and also appreciate the writer for the description which was given in the story there are many parts of the story which I like  the characters design was good and for now I'm waiting for the next update