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This is first off, well written. Secondly, its a nice slow paced story that starts from the beginning on how a child is growing up and turning into a villain. This is important to me as a reader because that's life. We see and learn from things. The MC is doing that from a tender age and is adapting to a toxic environment. Nothing crazy nor extreme. Just toxic. Definitely a good read. I wish the author updated more.
I'm not impressed. Although the synopsis shows the potential the book could be, but after reading the few chapters it seems like the MC is quite dumb for a person who once lived in the city. There is not precautions taken at all for all the secret he had unlike other novels MC. It is very frustrating. If only the author makes the MC to be more logical and details of him cultivating will be slightly exposed here and there though accidents that he was not aware instead of blatantly showing off through live-streaming where the entire world could see.
Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.
It is pretty good,not that bad at all. Just wish you would update more. Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice!
Grammar. Please add some full stops cuz it difficult to understand where one sentence starts and another ends. Also speech marks when individuals are speaking.
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