Team Up to Survive: Rescuing Friends During the Zombie Apocalypse

Been waiting for book 2. So far the best book that i've read. Good job author.

This first couple arcs are a fantastic tale of industry intrigue and competition. There are awesome set pieces, mystery, exciting battles, all of which contribute to the overall plot. The second half is just a Star Trek rip off that even the protagonist can wait to end. Its boring, and has no clear weight on the main plot. There no stakes, no mech designs, no other fun characters (except Ketis way later) This isn’t the first time I’ve seen an author shoot there story in the foot by introducing a long and, at the end of the day, waste of time arc. Maybe theres a huge pay off at the end, but several hundred chapters to get there means you’re milking the story for your readers money more than advancing the plot.

Iba bien. Hasta que me dio asco seguir leyendo la gramática es una mierda, lo párrafos son largo en ves de cortarlo a la mitad está entero y da asco leer. MC es una mierda molesta que le hayan sacado los recuerdos

Not gunna lie its pretty garbage, but its the kind of garbage that kind of warms up to you over time. The world building is pretty good... kind of... if you ignore that no one knows exactly how the monster tier system works. So far there are 3 decent characters aside from the mc that seem kinda interesting, especially Ironman and her mum. Story is kinda weak tbh but its better than I expected it to be, not much going on except farming/grinding monsters and occasionally going home or to sell stuff. Translation is pretty good so far and the update frequency is said to be around 10 chapters a week so that's pretty nice. All in all I would recommend it to anyone that is vaguely interested in Monsters Paradise, Monster Pet Evolution etc. Its a nice bit of junk that I know is bad for me but it helps me appreciate Monster Pet Evolution even more. But yeah, check it out if you have time on your hands.

Writing Quality well written , but sorry i forced my self to read 14chap i cant no more the mc total IDIOT TOTALY.  good luck author with your novel

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dropped?

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