The story has a good premise, but sadly the plain mc, which you can confuse for an passerby makes it boring. And the story developement is sometimes illogically forced.
In terms of writing, I found it very easy to read and the flow was smooth. I didn't come across many grammatical errors which is great for a wider audience. The conversational style of storytelling was engaging and I didn't have to keep going back to understand what was happening.
The plot was interesting and cleverly intertwined the protagonist's past and present life to create conflict, which gave the story great potential for development.
I felt that the characters were played safe, but overall they were okay. I hope to see growth and development in them as the story progresses.
The updating stability was consistent which is great for readers who want to keep up with the story.
The world background was well laid out and clear, and I am excited to see how it develops as the story progresses.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this and I plan on keeping it in my library.
I swear it’s like every authour on here has some sort of pact where they need to make their mc a spinless coward when it come towards dealing with women I honestly dont get it. The story isn’t that bad well at least the starting chapter the whole tournement arc was meh. When you read something that says monster girl harem in the title and have an mc that proudly proclaim that he’s gonna make one in just the first couple sentences you have certain expectations and those have truly not been met. Idk maybe it gets better after chapter 40 (doubtful)
A good book to pass the time, the story is good even the writing style is good. Recommended for the people who love romance with harem. [img=recommend]
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In terms of writing, I found it very easy to read and the flow was smooth. I didn't come across many grammatical errors which is great for a wider audience. The conversational style of storytelling was engaging and I didn't have to keep going back to understand what was happening.
The plot was interesting and cleverly intertwined the protagonist's past and present life to create conflict, which gave the story great potential for development.
I felt that the characters were played safe, but overall they were okay. I hope to see growth and development in them as the story progresses.
The updating stability was consistent which is great for readers who want to keep up with the story.
The world background was well laid out and clear, and I am excited to see how it develops as the story progresses.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this and I plan on keeping it in my library.