Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor (First draft)

I shamelessly give a review to myself. :)

I plan to divide the story into two main stages.
1) Apocalypse in MC original world.
2) Calamity in Gondola dimension.

Synopsis:
After living on Gondola for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the craw of Lucifer, one of emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his hometown, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began.

Writing Quality: It is at least better than I thought it would be. I do fight for improvement. Please help me edit it if you have some ideas. :)
Stability of Updates: I have both full-time and part-time jobs. I will try to update as frequently as possible.
Story Development: The events in the past life of MC will continuously reveal little by little throughout the story.
Character Design: I promise that there will be several key characters in the story.
World Background: Mixing between modern and fantasy.

The work speaks of its efforts. You really did great. I love synopsis and plot. The characters and the backgroung are really hooking me. Hope it would be a mass hit in the future

It is a really wonderful novel, I hope that it would be updated more often. I'm already waiting for further developments in the story.

i really like it

I rarely rea apocalypse genre but i had to review so i gave it a try. Not bad so far. Good storyline and the characters are well written. But i feel something missing here.

BRUH THIS IS GREAT :'D
Well, first, the writing itself is great, and I really love how the author portrays things. It felt like I could visualize it :D
AND THENNN THE PLOT IS SO GOOD LIKEE I FELT SO EMOTIONAL READING IT :'D
Man I love the characters and the sadness :')
Great work, author! Thank you for this! <3

I rarely read apoclypse and scifi story but this one is pretty good! The imagination, the world, the systems, all of them are very creative, interesting, and amazing!
Highly recommended

This is a good story. I didn't often read novels about apocalypse but this one is interesting and so is the main character and how will he save his planet. It only needs proofreading in some chapters then it will turn to a more improved version of the story. This is still new and I think the author will still improve with this one. Good luck author!