Tales of the DragonHeart: AshBorn

A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..

Story isn't bad, just the translation and qidian updates are messed up. Especially the last few where its been days and they haven't fixed there fault.

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only problem I have with it is not much chapters everything else is fine and stuff thx for this novelllllll appreciate it

this look like it's going to be pure chaos and i love chaos my understanding from your description is that an mental unstable person have a voice in his/she? head  die for some reason now got a system too resulting in pure chaos lets hope I got it right

very good book now for 140 characters hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgggggggghhggggggggyyyygygyyyyyyyyy

Really nice, but where's the rest now🙄🙄🙄... Thought it was complete, ooh God!!! Mira pls update now....🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

first review!!!still need a lot of work in story building, chapter length also need some works. grammar is excellent, i haven't found any big grammar problem. let's see how far you'll make the story, goodluck!