Tales of Magic Swordsman

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Great story and characters starts a little slow but builds up fast recommend to at least read the first couple chapters and the you'll be hooked and binge read the whole thing

This is going to be an honest review from someone who has read a fair amount of books and novels. To begin with you have a very cliche MC. Typical video game plot and leveling system which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The MC uses about 0% of his brain constantly which leads to lots of plot holes and making the readers angry with his stupid and illogical decisions. The book starts off with ok grammar if you can overlook the misuse of present and past tense as well as constant spelling errors but as it continues the grammar only gets worse. It gets so bad that almost every other sentence looks like a five year old wrote it and it honestly gives me a headache. The plot isn't that bad, its the grammar that needs to be fixed. Please hire someone to fix it.

i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job

The mc is a total retard. In the beginning of chapter it's said that auron can drop the item also there is no contract time that said after the duel the guild and his character must instantly be deleted. He can first calm his mine assembly the elite team that got the potion and ask them first then investigate the cold bank acc and etc and make a proof to trap vice guild and detroy her then assembly the upper echelon of the guild, it's unreasonable if in the whole guild he is the only pillar there's must be someone that he can trust and give the equipment to him and give the leadership to another one so that they can't be bribe and keep each other check then delete the character and start new. I don't hate this kind of novel but this mc is total retard ...

I really like this story and the direction it is going but that being said it had a really rough start and you have to push through the first few chapters where the author forces the MC into a really bad situation where he has to dig himself out of it with the help of his best friend. I think this was workable and the story developed nicely but the biggest issue is the constant grammar errors and word choice that makes this book difficult to continue and the reason I dropped it once it went premium. If the author was able to get a proofreader or an editor i think i would pick the story up again! This is just one lousy opinion and I hope the author can keep working the best they can and continue to improve!

Good story lots of interesting skill combinations and upgrades ,also I suggest u combine the similar chapters to take the time to change between chapters but overall the story is awesome