"It's okay to cry, you know," Mirei said softly, making him flinched. "I know when you cry no one cares, but that was in the past. Now you have me. I will be there to protect you, heck! I will be there to wipe your tears." Mirei told Naruto as his blue eyes were now shimmering due to tears.
Mas se você chegasse perto o bastante para ouvir a conversa você se surpreenderia com o tema e possivelmente apontaria como um caso de pedofilia e irresponsabilidade dos pais ou responsáveis.
Her hand enveloped in her gifted energy, she gripped her energy around the Sentry's chest cavity. Narrowing her shimmering eyes, she whispered, "I guess we'll never know."
A straightforward litRPG, but with its own mysteries and twists to keep it fresh. The story opens in medua res - the protagonist has died and already had his meeting in the after life, and we are left only guessing what happened and why.As stands, the 'curse' could be more substantial, but -10% HP may end up playing out as more annoying for the MC than one may initially expect. There are many questions: what kind of person was the MC? Why does he make some morally questionable choices so easily? Do others in this world have curses or even blessings?There is much to answer, explore, and build with this story. If you're interested in a story that starts similarly to many litRPGs but carries with it the promise of intrigue and twists, including that of the protagonist themselves, this is worth checking out.
The novel is fine, but it has something that improves in the personal development of the characters. For examples, there is the MC who in a reincarnation who behaves like a child, one gets carried away too much by what others think of him (he is over 30 years old), apparently he does not think for himself. Another one that has to improve the way of writing to do, For example added more details.
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