Maybe author write this for fun. Many useless explanations just to keep more word count. Why not just put your intention clear dont make your story complicated. Story and character is more generic type.
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Great first chapter for "The Bloodborne Heir," Bartholome! Alaric's journey from orphan to finding a loving family is heartwarming. Subtle hints about his past leave the reader curious for more. Keep writing!
What i like from nover are : MC is using brain to defeat enemies, Not like other MC that OP from the start, The cheat than he can use is not that powerfull (he must find legacy), MC not womanizer until now, Novel flow is acceptable not fast or too slow.
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