System of gods and devils

patreon <-- ? should have made one and would have supported you = = now not even interested.                                                              GL byebye

Did the author got kicked in the head by a donkey? Or is he that in need of money? He could've just announce it first but no... was a good tbh, but what a waste smh.

we need to address this matter . Dear Author. i read the message in the synopsis bar. let me clarify . your still gonna update chapters here but delete the previous ones? ex. current chapter 43  then after updating to 44 your gonna delete 43? is that how it works? pls clarify the situation

Tl:DR C+, Has potential, take a binge when it hits 75 chapters or so to see how it develops.

The Good: the same old good rpg system in a cultivation world concept with a solid twist. The basic premise of this novel is well thought out and the author has spent some time to flush it out in the chapters.

The Meh: like many others in its category the novel needs an editor. In its current form the novel reads like it was written by a high school freshman. I understand that the author is not a native English speaker, so kudos to you friend for putting the effort into this work, but you have lots of room to improve. Look at Once a Human, Now a Paracite as proof that improvement is possible. God speed.

The Bad: the adage of "show, don't tell" went out the window. The pacing of the naritive needs improvement and the ******* and release cycle might as well not exist. In its current form reading this novel is interesting but unsatisfying.

author fckd up there feelsbadman BUT
this morning i was still thinking it was not a smart move and not worth at all but that was all
i have to say that u guys are probably mentally destroying him
like " greed " ? Why don't I see this so called greed ?
the author just didn't think of the consequence and made that move to fast, opening a patreon could have made him earn way more and to cut all possible future readers from coming. how can u even say he was greedy ?
and even if he was i dont think flaming him that much can be any usefull never understood why ppl flame authors who stopped writting as if they owed u something lmao, i just say unlucky and tell them gl for their future
btw this case is not comparable to baisiwa's case