I really like this story as it has many possibilities and the coldness of the MC gives it a certain thrill. But it has to go in a certain direction to especially in the romance section as I see it not really fit for him to have a girl (maybe if he has an interdimensional empire)
So.. AI boy wakes upp and deconaminates earth, big problem though, Every single speck of life on earth is gone. Suddenly a portal to a high fantasy opens upp and AI boy decides to kill everyone that comes through the portal even thoug they can't even scrape the paint of his murder-machines.
Writing is not bad although there are plenty of misstakes.
Story could be awesome, but this is more my preference not being met
rather than it being bad.
It is impossible to sympathise with MC due to him, it? not having any emotions.
World building is ok.
The story itself is a wonderful concept, a splicing of a super scientific world with a fantasy world. The problem is execution. The story reads as if it’s being written by someone with English as their second language or straight from voice diction. The characters have weak impressions and the story rambles around with events and character actions that don’t really make much sense. There are some redeeming qualities however as the author often avoids common tropes (through design or mistake I can’t tell) and takes time to go back and review his work. Best of all he keeps to his release schedule.
I have really enjoyed this book. Story is about a guy who is a human robot hybrid that can control machines. One journey through a wormhole later he discovers a world of magic and dragons goblins etc... MC is a "bit" more overpowered than is strictly necessary (that is one sentence I never thought I would type seriously) overall it has the excitement you would hope for while reading the book description.
Pros:
overpowered mc
Great writing quality
Great action scenes
Characters are believable
Cons:
Author makes MC too powerful early in the story I expect to see some classic plot devices later on into the story to make up for this problem.
The actual technology building mechanics and in depth planning are somewhat lacking.
Overall I found it to be an amazing story definitely worth checking out!
I read the first 4 chapters and It was a great read. The world background is great till now. The pacing is excellent and I like that it is written in the first perspective POV. But as the main character is not properly described, so I cannot get an image of him in my mind. Would help if you write a little to describe him. But other than this, I liked everything and would recommend people to read it.
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Nothing much to add besides this.
Writing is not bad although there are plenty of misstakes.
Story could be awesome, but this is more my preference not being met
rather than it being bad.
It is impossible to sympathise with MC due to him, it? not having any emotions.
World building is ok.
Pros:
overpowered mc
Great writing quality
Great action scenes
Characters are believable
Cons:
Author makes MC too powerful early in the story I expect to see some classic plot devices later on into the story to make up for this problem.
The actual technology building mechanics and in depth planning are somewhat lacking.
Overall I found it to be an amazing story definitely worth checking out!