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  1. HeavenlyRascal
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    Great so far. Found it in the WPC section. I hope the author continues it. He seemed to have a lot of unfinished writings. The novel is great, not a lot of things happening at the same time or not too many exciting things but the fights and the interactions felt really good.
  1. JustinGabventurezoL
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    This is the first fic I've recommended to anyone ever in the years I've been on WN. It's that good. The author has found the perfect balance between Canon, VRMMO elements and an original storyline for the MC.This isn't one of those stories where the MC is supposedly not focused on gaining a harem or fucking the female cast into mindless slaves like so many others.Its not the usual world domination, the sith bs or the wannabe jedi bs nor the usual supposedly grey Force user.This guy is just like you and I, a real person, one who uses Jedi as his class but isn't some monk or depraved idiot, this guy is like a regular gamer whose moral spectrum remains that of a regular person, one whose out for profit without it being vulgar, one who has fun without it becoming some random slice of life shtick.I'm seriously fond of the story so far. It makes you feel like you're at the forefront of a true exploration in the VRMMO world at the dawn of full emersion technology, and Disney is right there capitalising on it and pushing it with the Starwars VRMMO that we have all dreamed of as fans.Stats exist, but the game isn't entirely centric on them, nor is the story, they add to your characters capabilities, a bit like expandable perks to be build up upon in call of duty, instead of perks like last stand.Its simply awesome. I go to bed dreaming I'm in this mmo at night, in the guild with this MC. It's just really cool.
  1. NowGoWithTheFlow
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    nic...............................................................................................................................................e
  1. Cripys
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    Great start just a shame there ain't more. Can't wait to see how it progresses. Has a very interesting main character. Keep up the great work and story.
  1. MuzeRion
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    Hey author! Why didn't you tell me that you joined the contest? Nevermind that but I will vote for your work tomorrow okay? I will pour any power stones that I have. Just until the contest ends. Hope I would be of help. Your story has potential and I enjoyed it. To winning!
  1. NathanMartin0523
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    The mystery the romance, the devil. Clearly the perfect story plot.
  1. Dunge
    Dunge rated it
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    "You ARE a pervert- but that's besides the point. Apologize for your harassment of Miss Sara! Please- you already have two strikes-"
  1. XimnaxhWh
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    I give up, I noticed looking into his clear and bright eyes. I'm completely in love with her and I do not want to fight against what I feel anymore.
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