Sweet Shot

The story has potential, it lacks a lot of correction and editing work, not so much because it is poorly written and the line of action cannot be followed, but because it detracts from the rest of the positive things such as the plot. Perhaps lengthening the chapters a little more by introducing some more situational descriptions would also enrich the text. Good job

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

It was overall an interesting and a very well written novel I loved every bit of it.