Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System

Honestly I have an hard time enjoying this story. The whole back and forth between 40k and starship trooper is kind of breaking my immersion for the story. Wished you made two stories rather than 1.

i was expecting starship troopers world and the rest are extra spice tech procurement you should change the title

In general, everything is fine, but the grammar is a little lame, there are words that are not clear, but otherwise everything is great, thanks for the translation. I am writing with the help of a translator .

The writing quality needs some work but not too bad honestly, story development is pretty good and immersive, best fictional fanfic I've read so far.I highly suggest this for Warhammer fans and all readers out there.

Love me a good book!

Great book .
It has elements of Warhammer, RimWorld, etc.

As luck would have it I read from the translations so I don't judge the grammar.

no space marine ??? then bye for now maybe in future when I had more time to waste I come back to read warhammer that had no space marine