Surviving In My Novel

Really hard to get into this novel, tried trekking on to see if it got any better but sadly it doesnt. Author's style of "teleporting" is very jarring and makes the pacing really off. If the synopsis of the novel has the author asking us to skip essentially 20-40 chapters because many people didnt enjoy the first 20 chapters, it really says something about the novel. Maybe a rework like they said they might do will improve it.

This was pretty fun and confusing to ready. With the release of the latest Chapter though I can see that’s it’s taking a huge turn and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed!

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It is in my library, recommended

Hello the book was really good. I really liked the character designs. The plot was very good to you don’t know what could happen next.

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I looked at the title and for some reason, unknown to god! thought Australia.

Then I saw that author was Australian.

Then I laughed for longer than I’m willing to admit.

This has been my ted talk.

I only ask that you read carefully before posting a review, and please don’t just put a negative review because you personally don’t like a certain type of theme, I won’t bother with it. If I can improve on something, I will try, but I am not going to compromise the plot because someone doesn’t like the MC having a personality which they don’t like.

Thanks for reading my novel!

Yo I don’t usually do a review this may be the first but I have to tell you that this novel of yours has potential with just the few chapters I read it’s probably something new with all the cultivation and romance novels here