Survival Zer0

Hello, readers! I'm just writing this review to give a little more insight into my book. It gets into the story quickly so it's not bad pacing-wise. However, the first few chapters might feel like it's lacking in meaning. Like it may feel as if the characters are simply just in the game to survive. But I urge you to continue past this as the plot gets very interesting further down. You'll be able to feel the drive and the direction that I want the story to go in. And there's a lot of foreshadowings as well so pay attention to them.

Lastly, if you like this book after reading then please check out my other book called The Mind World And The Outcast Hero. In some ways, it's even better than this one. So please give it a try as I'm sure you won't be disappointed. I appreciate the support!

When it comes to storylines about survival whether in movies or novels. I will definitely be among the top readers but what makes a story a different one is the author. With such a great author, I'm sure this will make one keep begging for more. Keeping going author

This book is decent, The grammatical errors look non-existent and the story is starting at a good pace, The starring is quite mysterious, U think The reader who likes to read some mystery and gaming novel they would love this novel

However, there are fewer details about the surroundings and characters

Writing Quality: Good writing quality that is rare on this app. Could be better with more realistic/mature dialogue, but I guess that is a personal preference since some people are into characters who act like ten year olds so still five stars.

Updating Stabibility: Good.

Story Development: Interesting plot. Bad world building that throws you in without proper build up.

Character Design: Horrible characters. Attempts to make a cold main character, does this extremely poorly. Main reason I dropped this. Would be better with a shounen tag and a more generic shounen personality as author’s style seems tailored to shounen.

World Background: Interesting, needs better buildup

Overall: Interesting plot, poor execution. Recommend making a shounen protagonist for future novels. Would recommend to people interested in shounen type novels, just not my personal taste.

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Hoho, 10th review. Excellent.

The plot is interesting.
The writing quality is good, but still needs some work. Story develops nicely so I had no problems with that. I would like to see how Shade's character goes on in the story(the way he thinks etc.) Over all good work author!