Supreme Origin: Time King

Overall it's a great theme and a great story. Seems like it has great potential to be a few hundred chapters long if the author sticks with it. So far the only thing is the grammatical errors but the author said they were working on it so in my opinion it's a great book overall and a recommended read

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This novel is good.Sure,it might not have good grammar and the story sometimes not making sense it still is awesome.A whole 112 chapters are free and the main charater is strong but not too strong.All in all i would recommend this novel!

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Damn why you make the main character seem weak at times dude lowkey supposed to be strong as **** he used to be stupid strong in his other life’s so
Why does he struggle so much against everyone

Needs a few grammar corrections... getting into lecture mode explaining the levels of power and whatnot of the universe is a bit forced could be more natural with hints here and there to make us get it.  But nevertheless a good story so far will continue to read it