Supreme Human System

It is a good story and i really liked how story is developing . I highly recommend u guys to read it once or just give a try to this story   For me i liked this story and ofc the all characters and character development

Just amazing , author did a great job in binding one with the stories .Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. This is something different and incredible at the same time.
Brilliant writing sir.

I would place this novel with some high ranking story, based on potential; the characters aren't cutouts. They make rational and irrational decisions that fit their personality.

I'm not able to guess the plot or what will
happen next

Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is
progressing with little predictable that is a familiar turn off for the system-oriented genre

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REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
Now, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!
ADVICE
Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were sometimes unnecessary spacings here and there  The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️ And use grammarly! It will help lessen obvious mistakes!

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This is my first time that i am giving  a review of a story and i think this is good story from my point view even though there are not many chapters now but still the character development  is very good.