Supreme Emperor System

Why are the chapters erasing?
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Its a story I would recommend, but not strongly. It has potential and will certainly be well recieved by the LitRPG groups but its pretty basic. Sure I haven't read anything identical and its an intriguing idea but it isn't fast enough to make one hooked.

I read the 15 chapters and I loved it but when the updates are like they are(1 chapter everyday or two) its simply hard to hold the same interest as a large chapter everyday. I'm not saying that its a bad pace especially since I have experience writing and I know how hard it is to keep writing while life is going on.

The character developement is a tad bland but this isnt a professional book. It seems like the MC was adapting way to quickly and accepting a crazy thing like it was an everyday occurrence. He acted vicious in one chapter to someone who did something nonsensical to the MC but it wasn't that made sense.

The world is made to be similar to the real world and even recently(chapter 22 for me) included a real event with some large company but it seemed  slightly exaggerated. Not that it is negative to point out.

Overall I hope it gets more popular and gets some better pointers and the Author improves the story. Good Luck! I'll be in the shadows lurking like always!

great writing so far. cool modern day setting. keep it up. i love system novels. cannot think enough for 140 characters jfkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkskskzisi

As an Indian I'm interested to see how he develops a military baSe in India fin@lly a story that mentions my birth country in a story really interested to see how it develops and 5he understanding of the author on Indian culture will depend as not all can be bribed ad per the author

As per author request, here is my review.  Overall the story progress nicely.  The growth rate of MC on the slow side(strength wise), other growth such as earning and skills are in moderate range.  In MC growth department, overall in an acceptable range.  The only drawback is the release rate of the chapter is a bit too slow.  It's to the point that I almost forget about the story plot.  But I do understand if the author has some difficulty as we are all human and this is not a serious paying job for the author.   Thanks for your sharing spirit.  This is my review for now if you need more just let me know.