The novel is good but the orthography is bad, if the author improve his orthography (or gets a editor)and edits all the chapter I can see this novel in a much higher rank.
i gave u the 5 star for the promising story and the 120 chapter in 1 week .
a man of focus indeed........................................................................................................
I cant understand the translation. Nothing matters if the translation is garbage. The expressions don't make sense, nothing makes sense. Those who stuck with it, I have to say super impressed.
Get a editer it seems like it was run through Google translate. The words are rather jumbled and attempt at simile and metaphors are tricky to decipher. Gender words should be considered as reference to a species. Also the word larva was mistaken as ladies.
Every when is the update for this book? I just finished Rui's & Chase's story and I am looking forward to Phyllis&Zacharias, Leia&Taylor and ofcourse Eon& Lia's stories.... I love the fact that the same characters from the previous book still appear here because I will surely miss Eon and Chase.
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a man of focus indeed........................................................................................................